No, it shouldn't be that way, I believe.

You did a good job.

Hey i love the poem but where it says who's lose and confused shoudnt it be lost and confused other that that awsome

shadowpreistess

ok ok ok ok its wonderful lol its scary how well i can relate to all the stuff u write! heehee

Aww sad. I know how it feels to be that girl in the corner. It is one lonly little corner. Good work.

It was really good. Thank you for the reviews.

NEPHTHYS

I might change my pen-name, just a heads-up

I understand this. People are so quick to judge. I guess there isn't much you can do about it. I think you meant "lose" to be "lost" though. Great job, and God bless!