finally you put this poem up! yay!

i loves the brackets with double meanings and stuff, it's great

im not feeling eloquent today, sorry, but anyway, i love it

"She's shallow like a flesh wound"

FINALLY you are making use of the holidays to get some poetry in. Its boring without'cho.

And todays you missed the sighting of the world's CHAVVIEST girl. I am not even kidding. She should have CHAV tattoed on her forehead.

Wow. The rhythm of this is really incredible. Having once been around someone similar I can relate very much to this. This is rightly intense for the subject matter and gets the cynicism one feels in a situation like this across very well.