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| cling peach 2007-01-15 ch 1,  | abuseLovely nature poem! "a golden, star-crossed leaf" is a great phrase. The whole poem just had a great atmosphere. It was calm and lazy and just warm... which is really nice because as I'm writing this, there's snow falling outside my window! You even made the winter seem quiet, which made me feel a lot nicer towards the freezing-ness outside! Great work, keep it up. :) |