There are some missing words and mistakes that you should fix but the story is fantastic! I like you're little short story love encounters!

>< you should make more chapters >

that was so cute. I loved it! Bravo!

aw that is so sweet..i guess her christmas isn't stupid after all..well loved it...can't believe that its ends already..well just going to head out then..peace out gurl...bye-bye then...:D...