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| Red Tears Black Wings 2007-09-11 ch 1,  | abuseHey, Great poem, very deep and full of emotion. I love it. Very sad and I have to say that I know what and how you feel. Good luck with everyting. ~Mandy |
| randompoetry 2006-12-22 ch 1, | abuseThis was really interesting, very heartbreaking and...tragic. You really get your emotions through very well. One thing I would have to say is almost all of your phrases start with And, which is a little distracting after a while. On another note: (there's so many you's though) what a wonderful line. It makes so much sense with the line before and I fell it love with it. This is a very strong, emotional poem and it is very very good! |