This is a wonderful story. There's no way I would have read all 23 chapters if it wasn't. I like that you incorporated the supernatural into it. I'm usually not a fan of that kind of thing, but you've managed to pull it off beautifully. Good job. Please keep writing this story.

It's been quite some time... ^^

I'VE MISSED YOU! I really have!! You dropped off the face of the earth, went to the moon, came back on a shooting star, and updated. :D I loved the chapter! That scene between Tsuyoshi and Satoshi was very, very cute. It reminded me of the days when you used to update regularly. :D

Really great! Your plot has a lot of future potential, unlike some of mine that seem to lose steam.

I think you have a word replacement evul for evil :)

You are very talented and I really enjoy your work.

This line made me giggle though. "We should get going," Tsuyoshi **, grabbing Tsuyoshi's arm. (maybe exclaimed)lol

What happened!! It's been so long since you've updated, I'm tempted to think you've fallen off the face of the earth!

I hope you haven't decided to abandon this story, not when it was getting so good. You've already written twenty-two amazing chapters, after all.

It's been a long time :D

I LOVE kyudo and kendo, but never got the chance to learn 'cause my parents're too busy to send me to classes. I've only learned lame karate, but I guess that's close enough. ^^ Off to read the next chapters~

Every story needs a filler! That's what keeps the plot going, haha. Another excellent chapter. I thought it was super-cool when Satoshi came to Tsuyoshi's rescue, and then Kazuhiko too! So now that Satoshi's awake, what's gonna happen now?

Ah, and about my last review; I went back and re-read that scene I was confused about. It makes sense now that I know it's Tsuyoshi. He's kneeling, bwahaha.

Gosh, I wanna cry. I'll be in Florida for the next two weeks, so I won't be around to look for updates. I'm still a huge fan, so if you do update, chances are I'll get around to reading it once I return.

Kazuhiko is still awesome! I can't wait to see what happens when Satoshi wakes up. Oh, and question: Is Satoshi still in fox-form? That last little bit, when Tsuyoshi was feeding Satoshi, had me a little confused. I didn't think foxes had knees or hands, haha. ^^;;

Yay! I loved the chapter!! Kazukhiko sounds a bit free-spirited and mischievious... I think him and Satoshi are gonna get along very well, much to Tsuyoshi's chagrin, lol... he's just gonna hate it!! XD I can't wait for the next chapter!! I want to know more about those ominous spirits that are blocked by the shimenawa... can't wait!!

Kazuhiko's pretty cool, I can't believe that he and Tsuyoshi are related! I wonder though, why did he give Tsuyoshi that stern warning? Is something going to happen?! (Duh, of course.) ^_^

UPDATE SOON PLEASE. I like this story so please update quickly.

Please update this story. It will make happy if you do.

It was excellent! I can't wait till Ch. 19! Tsuyoshi and Satoshi's love for each other to the point that they're willing to die for each other is beautiful...

I remember Kazuhiko from chapter six! I always wondered if he would play a role in the story, and it looks like he is, haha. It's great to see that this story is going to extend for even longer than I thought. Maybe I'll draw some fanart, too.