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| HurtMe 2008-04-02 ch 23, | abuseThis is a wonderful story. There's no way I would have read all 23 chapters if it wasn't. I like that you incorporated the supernatural into it. I'm usually not a fan of that kind of thing, but you've managed to pull it off beautifully. Good job. Please keep writing this story. |
| Dancing Noodles 2008-03-28 ch 23, anon. | abuseIt's been quite some time... ^^ I'VE MISSED YOU! I really have!! You dropped off the face of the earth, went to the moon, came back on a shooting star, and updated. :D I loved the chapter! That scene between Tsuyoshi and Satoshi was very, very cute. It reminded me of the days when you used to update regularly. :D |
| Rika Onienkai 2008-03-27 ch 23, | abuseReally great! Your plot has a lot of future potential, unlike some of mine that seem to lose steam. I think you have a word replacement evul for evil :) |
| Rika Onienkai 2008-02-28 ch 14, | abuseYou are very talented and I really enjoy your work. This line made me giggle though. "We should get going," Tsuyoshi **, grabbing Tsuyoshi's arm. (maybe exclaimed)lol |
| Silent Skies 2007-12-22 ch 22, anon. | abuseWhat happened!! It's been so long since you've updated, I'm tempted to think you've fallen off the face of the earth! I hope you haven't decided to abandon this story, not when it was getting so good. You've already written twenty-two amazing chapters, after all. |
| Dancing Noodles 2007-08-18 ch 22, anon. | abuseIt's been a long time :D |
| Chinese Dragon Keeper 2007-07-10 ch 3, | abuseI LOVE kyudo and kendo, but never got the chance to learn 'cause my parents're too busy to send me to classes. I've only learned lame karate, but I guess that's close enough. ^^ Off to read the next chapters~ |
| Dancing Noodles 2007-07-10 ch 21, anon. | abuseEvery story needs a filler! That's what keeps the plot going, haha. Another excellent chapter. I thought it was super-cool when Satoshi came to Tsuyoshi's rescue, and then Kazuhiko too! So now that Satoshi's awake, what's gonna happen now? Ah, and about my last review; I went back and re-read that scene I was confused about. It makes sense now that I know it's Tsuyoshi. He's kneeling, bwahaha. |
| Dancing Noodles 2007-06-22 ch 20, anon. | abuseGosh, I wanna cry. I'll be in Florida for the next two weeks, so I won't be around to look for updates. I'm still a huge fan, so if you do update, chances are I'll get around to reading it once I return. Kazuhiko is still awesome! I can't wait to see what happens when Satoshi wakes up. Oh, and question: Is Satoshi still in fox-form? That last little bit, when Tsuyoshi was feeding Satoshi, had me a little confused. I didn't think foxes had knees or hands, haha. ^^;; |
| Empress Satori 2007-06-18 ch 19, anon. | abuseYay! I loved the chapter!! Kazukhiko sounds a bit free-spirited and mischievious... I think him and Satoshi are gonna get along very well, much to Tsuyoshi's chagrin, lol... he's just gonna hate it!! XD I can't wait for the next chapter!! I want to know more about those ominous spirits that are blocked by the shimenawa... can't wait!! |
| Dancing Noodles 2007-06-08 ch 19, anon. | abuseKazuhiko's pretty cool, I can't believe that he and Tsuyoshi are related! I wonder though, why did he give Tsuyoshi that stern warning? Is something going to happen?! (Duh, of course.) ^_^ |
| DRAGONFIRE04 2007-06-08 ch 19, | abuseUPDATE SOON PLEASE. I like this story so please update quickly. |
| DRAGONFIRE04 2007-06-05 ch 18, | abusePlease update this story. It will make happy if you do. |
| Empress Satori 2007-04-28 ch 18, anon. | abuseIt was excellent! I can't wait till Ch. 19! Tsuyoshi and Satoshi's love for each other to the point that they're willing to die for each other is beautiful... |
| Dancing Noodles 2007-04-24 ch 18, anon. | abuseI remember Kazuhiko from chapter six! I always wondered if he would play a role in the story, and it looks like he is, haha. It's great to see that this story is going to extend for even longer than I thought. Maybe I'll draw some fanart, too. |