i like it sometimes i wish i could just runaway and disappear but i disappear through writting and i can runaway to a place in my mind that no one can reach

really quite nice. the format just adds to make it even nicer. the echo is hard to pull off, congradulations.

I've never seen this format used for a poem so it was interesting for me. The poem itself is interesting too. Very creative.

Interesting. I really like this poem. Creates it's own rhythm.

Peace and Love

~> Summer's Almost Gone

one word... incredible. keep it up. i really like the way its written [review back?]