I am so excited that you updated! It was a very nice chapter. I hope that you update soon. Darn cliffhangers! lol. Good job.

this is getting quite intriguing...God I hope I spelled that last word right >.

I like this story. It is very different from many of the stories I have read. Different in a good way though. You write very well. Keep on going! I like it a lot.

well...
this is beginning to get a little odd
I am wondering when the action will pick up...nice job tho!

-Alkahest

You're still an excellant author. I'm holding my breath for the next chapter (not literally, that miht be a couple of days)

-Alkahest

This new installment is excellent. will they ever find the true killer? will lunya ever be set free?

i cant wait for the next chapters!

still damned good!

Awesome! You have a certain nack (did I spell that right?) for story telling!

oh my god!! this story is progressing very well. o what's going to happen to Lunya?? is she going to spend her life in the cell forever?? or is Leransle going to have a change of heart and let her free?? or are they going to fall in love and spend the rest of life their life together?

the suspense is killing me!
please update as soon as possible!