Great poem. I love your choice of words and descriptions. Well done.

oh, i love the vocab, very exciting... (just don't go overboard, it's go to flow (NOT A FLAME!)) this is so pretty!! the imagery again! that's what I call tallent! ooh, so supple! I love your writing! keep it up!!

this is beautiful... I really love the first stanza.. great job

To put it simply - Beautiful! I have no more words to describe this poem becoz its just excellent, i love it and well done for writing it, its just amazing!!

Lotsa love
~AC~

I'm speechless, Lily. I'd tell you its lovely but that goes without saying.