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Reviews For: Brother of mine

Siona 2007-01-16 ch 1, anon.	abusethe father has a really vivid voice. You're really good at making sure all the characters have their own voice. And yes, I can tell this in the little i've read. I would guess where the plot's going (and be absolutely wrong because I'd be hoping for rabbits and butterflies and rainbows j/k) but it's kind of confusing. I get the part about it being some sort of japanese thing, and there's twin brothers. Um, but where did the (what was she, the mother?) come from? And were you talking about statues at one point? Writing's really good though. You're really good at voice, i have to say yet again. keep up the good work.
blue_eyed_angel 2007-01-12 ch 1, anon.	abuseI love how you jump into the plot right away and manage to set the scene, tone, and main idea injust the first few lines. I was hooked immediately. I'd like to know why they are watching him so close. Why is he a threat? Why did his brother leave? Were they close? What's with the 20 years of reign? What fued, with who? Is that really his mother that just licked him? ew! Obviously the guy doesn't want to go after his bro, I think he's gonna bring back a different hand. Whatever happens, this guy's gonna go through some major internal turmoil. Keep writing! I'll be checking periodically!!
Uke-Mochi 2006-12-23 ch 1,	abuseDamn. That's good. You should definately keep going if you've got plot going through your mind. I can't wait to see what happens next... And as they say, working on multiple things keeps writter's (or artist's) block at bay... Ai, ~~Uke_Mochi, your seme... hahahah... Finish ch 17 damnit! >.< WRARGE! OR NO COOKIES FOR YOU!

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