I agree with you there, guys do lie and they do suck. I hear ya. This poem had a very violent tone to it but I thought you did a good job of keeping the tone throughout and although it was a bit cynical, I can't blame you because I know what you mean.

Did you have the Merriam-Webster's Emo Edition Dictionary on hand when coming up with... your "poem"? The language is weak and cliché, and the occasional "**" does nothing to your poem's aggressiveness or effect.