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Reviews For: Fish

fatbird33 2008-03-30 ch 1,	you wrote this when you were 8? wow
Evenunderscore 2007-01-19 ch 1,	Sorry, With Ryme and Reason, but I have to disagree: while we do develope more interesting styles of writing over time, it is our early writing that influences the way that we think and write later; I see no problem with posting a poem written at eight. As a matter of fact, I thought that the poem was quite cute.
his-troll 2007-01-05 ch 1,	Despite whomever that is down there said, I believe that its nice to show how you've grown, and Fish is a nice way to do it. Maybe its just cause I find showwing off a poem you wrote when you were eight charming, but I think it has to do more with growth. Obviously, in the years, your writing is going to improve. Good job, yes, for an eight year old.
Frizz the Eccentric 2007-01-04 ch 1,	Poor fish.
lady nikki the nymphetamine 2007-01-01 ch 1,	perhaps the first period should be a comma instead, but i think it's really cute other than that
With Rhyme and Reason 2006-12-23 ch 1,	In your summary, you mention you wrote this when you were eight. It's obvious. I know people will say that the quality of their work doesn't matter, as long as their age is young. But we improve. It is not wise to show off your questionable ability as an eight year old poet. We're not in elementary school anymore. That's why we post new, more interesting and thought-provoking stuff. That said, your rhyme scheme is charming, but juvenile. I only wish there was more substance to the poem. J

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