o man i just can't stop reading this series! ahh great work!

*ridiculous fan-girl squeal*
Brilliant, as always. I'm off to read the last one!

-Paige

OMFGSH!
AH!
HOLY SHIT!

AH!

Ok.
I'm done now.
Cuz I have to move to book three.
I can't even begin to express how truly amazing your series is...so I won't even try.


xoxoxo,
Ty

OMFGSH!
AMAZING!
I must sleep though.
lol
But I will continue tomorrow.
Hopefully I will get through book 2 and 3 and be able to start fresh with 4 by the end of the weekend.
:]

xoxoxo,
Ty

Another enemy, can't wait to see more

omgwtfbbq Sweet...

How Star Wars :( Besides that minor or not so minor thing it was excellent chapter. Everything moved smoothly, the fight was epic. Good job

Very good chapter. Can't wait to see how it all ends.

Great scene with the police. Another short chapter but it's obvious this is setting up the grand finale of this arc.

This chapter felt like it should have been added onto the end of the last chapter. it was short and not a whole lot happened. Still good though.

D: @ cliff hangers. You seem to be in a killing mood as well :( Where's the holiday spirit? Oh and look, line breaks between sections YAY

Solid chapter but I must admit I was hoping you would twist the death around and pick someone else.

Much stronger chapter in a writing sense but not as much is revealed. The fight scene reminded me of the Crazy 8 scene in Kill Bill Volume 1

A lot happens in this chapter. besides a few blips along the way the only thing I would recommend is a line break or something to show a character change. Meaning when you switch from the fight to the Raine bit it should have a break, showing we've changed characters and locations.

Glad it's been update, another excellent chapter.