Reviews for Vampire: Chapter 1

Rayet Wolf 2006-12-28 ch 1,	abuseShort chapter, sweet and to the point. Pretty good but just remember to spell check. Otherwise, I see an interesting story of horror and the weird approaching
Inkspilled 2006-12-23 ch 1,	abuseIt's interesting, but some parts used the wrong grammer. "...going on since me very young.." It should be 'since I was very young' or something. But that's it, the storyline begininng is good and interesting. Keep writing, sounds like it could be a long story...:)