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| B.S. Ha 2007-10-22 ch 1,   | Wow. Talk about intense. The only thing is this: "Sick giving in to this" "in to" should be "into." Sorry- habit. :) It kinda sounds like a rap, or something? But the message is strong, and it's clear (for the most part) Good job, BSHa |
| southern gurl 247 2007-01-04 ch 1, | girl that was freakin alsome! i love it! its the truth! lol! miranda |