 Rowena Rooney 2009-10-30 . chapter 1This made me sad.
A very beautiful poem, remarkable. |
 Cuenta 2009-06-28 . chapter 1Great imagery, rhyme scheme, and word choice. |
 InbetweenTwins 2008-03-27 . chapter 1Aw, this was really great. I enjoyed reading it and I think that was a very interesting concept you addressed, I haven't really thought about that before. Kudos on the job well done :] |
 Little Crayon 2008-02-12 . chapter 1That made me want to cry. I absolutely adore this piece. |
 YellowLilac 2007-05-28 . chapter 1very sad, but very nicely done |
 Forget-The-Sorrow 2007-01-13 . chapter 1I know what you mean. |
 lilyqueen777 2007-01-11 . chapter 1Yes...a poem that is i can relate and so can every other person, and a poem that makes me go wow...i love it a lot...and such simple words that create such a powerful poem...
anyway, i just added your poem to the c2 list and fav.
question though did you mean in this line "No thing truly lasts forever" did u mean nothing or no thing...? |
 undescribableMONiiCA. 2006-12-24 . chapter 1Although me and her were like 4rth graders or 5th graders I had a memorie like that with my EX-best friend. It is kind of sad though that after TWO WHOLE YEARS it all got thrown away... |