This made me sad.

A very beautiful poem, remarkable.

Great imagery, rhyme scheme, and word choice.

Aw, this was really great. I enjoyed reading it and I think that was a very interesting concept you addressed, I haven't really thought about that before. Kudos on the job well done :]

That made me want to cry. I absolutely adore this piece.

very sad, but very nicely done

I know what you mean.

Yes...a poem that is i can relate and so can every other person, and a poem that makes me go wow...i love it a lot...and such simple words that create such a powerful poem...

anyway, i just added your poem to the c2 list and fav.

question though did you mean in this line "No thing truly lasts forever" did u mean nothing or no thing...?

Although me and her were like 4rth graders or 5th graders I had a memorie like that with my EX-best friend. It is kind of sad though that after TWO WHOLE YEARS it all got thrown away...