I like this a lot, it was very well written. I have found that a lot of yuri stories are very poorly written, but you have done quite well here. I think Angeline's name was a little too cliched (stupid no accent marked keyboard...), but by the end I got used to it. Keep up the good work.

Helena

Strange tale, but a good one. So Magda was a ghost? Still a very interesting story nonetheless.

I love it, I LOVE IT! its awesome and gruesome and sexy and AWESOME!