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| nomy 2008-10-25 ch 1,   | i read and read and read and i will never get bored..thats how much i love this one so mucchh~ the ending give me a bittersweet feeling but i think that its supposes to happen anyway~so want to say Great Job and keep up the stories coming coz i love all your stories but never did get a chance to review them..loves Winter and Sebastian!..a truly cute and opposite attract couple that i love.. |
| Bloodfeeder 2008-09-17 ch 1, | Aw!I like it. I like the part about him only really living for micheal. It really ilustrates how he feels for him |
| TenshiGosuperu 2008-08-02 ch 1, | The ending is awesome, it's like history repeating itself but...in a good way. :D |
| MistressRayven 2008-05-26 ch 1, | It's so sweet... |
| MacKitty 2008-03-20 ch 1, | oh dammit, i want a sequel...:whines: |
| Casey and the Golden Leaf B... 2008-03-19 ch 1, | Aw... That is soo cute. I could kill it but I love it. It smells nice. |
| sunsetLover 2007-12-22 ch 1, | i like it..i think you should not leave it just as a one-shot thing...please continue adding chapters how they got acquainted again...lol...it was really nice one |
| summerxsteps 2007-09-07 ch 1, | aw. i loved this. it's simple, yet sad. amazing. |
| mia5081 2007-08-22 ch 1, | That was so sweet/sad. I'm also going to pretend that Michael regains his health, and remembers who Western is and they live happily ever after lol. Loved it! ~Mia |
| Vera Dicere 2007-08-07 ch 1, | o, i like this. i think you really convey western's emotions very well. and the juxtaposition of the flashbacks and present scenes is really well done. i like that you left it sort of open ended, but also somewhat hopeful, since the last scene mirrors their first meeting. very nice. :) |
| CaFFy 2007-07-08 ch 1, | Aw. They really start over. =*) I love how you incorporate pants into the story. ahhahahha. |
| The Baker Rose 2007-07-08 ch 1, | It's been a while since I've had a chance to read anything this good. Your writing is clear and unashamed, and it doesn't dance around the slash like some stories do. You rose to the challenge well. I only pray that you keep writing and someday publish. ~In Memoiam - JDC |
| Wolf bathed in Star-light 2007-06-25 ch 1, | ah! where did he get the medication for when u get possesed by aliens? cause i think i have that. Silly Western always doing homework. homework is BAD. trust me, i know these things *looks knowledgable* *humms to herself* So ehre it somes, the sound of drums. here come the drums, here come the drums. how does a cake melt? i mean one that isn't made by me, cause well, my cooking skills are not to be desired. but i didn't make that cake (or at least i think i didn't) so how come it melted? ZOMG! NO! MICHAEL DOESN'T REMEMBER HIM! WHY?! WHY IS THE WORLD SO CRUEL?!?!?!?! *breaks down* aw! but it's okay, i think the end is tres sweet. *sweeps michael and western up into a big bear hug* i flew today! twas fun but painful. i hurt my hip. *pout* it wasn't as fun as being on the school roof but it was fun. what's your daily news? x |
| school-girl crush. 2007-06-04 ch 1, | Ending...ending...unexpected. unique. I like. {I'm usually more coherent than this, yes.} *cough*sequelwouldbeamazing*cough* xD Great job. |
| Sialice 2007-05-15 ch 1, | Hey, I really like this story. It's kind of tear jerking, I felt really bad when Michael didn't remember who Western was. Kinda makes me feel like crying, lol, but that's just because I am in a not-awesome mood. I loved the end though, excellent story, again. |