Great fic! reminds me of James Blunt!

Cute, short story. The ending made me smile. Nice work.

Good luck with writing, this story, and life. Have a lovely day.

Twilight Starr

Oh my gosh! Lanky! That story really kicked ass! Outstanding phrase was most definately "ike I’d swallowed handfuls of broken glass and it was shredding me to pieces." So shocked by that beautifulness I am not even going to insult you at all (for once) in this review. Also, I love the colour chesnut. Perfect choice.

This is such a beautiful love at first sight story type thing. I love it to pieces! Love at first sight doesnt seem so impossible now... But I guess the whole being visited by an angel thing probably helped to make up his mind a bit.

Still, amazingly great work! You certainly pulled this one out of a hidden away chest buried 57 miles underground in Timbuck two with a vicious three headed dog to guard anyone but you from getting it.

interesting.