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| xoX-Magic-Q7-Xox 2008-04-15 ch 1,  | abusewow. magic! |
| Johannas mirror 2008-03-14 ch 1, | abuseTake me too |
| His Mercy's Waiting 2008-02-16 ch 1, | abuseShort and sweet. :) I liked it. Keep writing! |
| aprettywar 2008-02-10 ch 1, | abusei like the idea of change and becoming something / going somewhere else. the imagery is also beautiful. nice work. |
| Scribe Of All Trades 2008-02-07 ch 1, | abuseagain, very honest and dramatic. and I love the imagery--another one of my favs. |
| The Cowardly Lion 2007-12-30 ch 1, | abuseI am in love with this. The somehow helpless, damaged, lonely concept I'm getting from this. Maybe it's just me right now. |
| Simply Relative 2007-04-20 ch 1, | abuseShort, simple, and I loved it. Very good work on this one. |
| spikethedead 2007-03-05 ch 1, | abuseThis is so gorgeous, I think that your use of punctuation is a little strange though. there are commas but no periods. I realize that poetry doesn't follow normal grammatical laws though, so perhaps it is just your style of writing. |
| Royal Bliss 2006-12-24 ch 1, | abusePretty short but good, nice work. |