It is a very nice relation of volleyball. It captures the feeling and rythym of the game,and I like it. Keep writing!

adreniline, but it doesn't matter, i love the short lines, they add rhythem, good job.

I didn't really like this poem, though I used to be a volleyball player myself. The last lines "The name of the game, is volleyball." is cliche.

The purpose of a poem is to show a different view on s known topic, and to captivate the reader. If you find a new spin on how to convey your feelings to the game, and choose your words more carefully, and avoid cliche phrases it could be a good piece.

I wish you luck, and hope you will try again (this review isnt meant to discourage but to help you improve)

it was okay. it is a wierd topic. this is my new laptop. i think you can do beter but on a different topic that is more relatable. peace