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Reviews For: To Do Battle
Kapoo 2008-02-15 . chapter 1
You talk about the fight alot. is it really about the fight or is it a metaphor, or are they all different
ChildeOfChaos 2007-01-09 . chapter 1
Yet another great piece here, I enjoyed it. The comma in line 13 seems out of place and messes with the rhythm. Other than that, great work.
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