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| Gareth-Vandersleld 2008-07-23 ch 1,  | abuseI hate those who mock us, but when the clock stikes 12, they will all be dead. |
| sicklysnowwhite 2007-01-13 ch 1, | abusei dont like this. not for the steryotypical POV but because its a little... dare i say stupid. a little TOO simple minded. perhaps wording it better, using more discriptive words, ect. "rarely are they seen in the light of day," it doesnt hit any nerves. its kind of boring. who cares. no one sees them. so what? put a point into it. put feeling into it. |
| Freaked 2006-12-29 ch 1, | abuse^_^ Love. |
| Mr. Magic 2006-12-24 ch 1, | abuseI loved this! I am sort of goth my self and i do know some Goths and it describes them perfectly! Thank you for writing this! Mr.Magic |