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| a bitter kiss. 2006-12-26 ch 1,   | Wow, this was wonderful. It has this same feeling you get when uhh... you know... you're sitting in a cafe, having coffee, reading a good book.. I loved the line: "Acknowledgement that he sees me everyday stealing glances at him, wearing that extra bit of mascara just for him." and the end: "But I think I’d best not try it…. I’ll only end up hurting myself." Wonderful. Happy Holidays. :D |