Well... I would say poor guy, but he's kind of a jerk, so.. Meh. Sucks for him.

"So that's it, then.

I got evicted.

I'm homeless.

This is by far the worst Monday I've had in a while."

I LOVE THIS STORY! The pathetic existence of your anti-hero actually makes me feel better about my life.

Hope you write some more like it, I love your style (and I definately agree about Morrissey...)

Keep writing!

Kate

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I can't believe this story only got four reviews, it's one of the best things I've ever read on this site. And I can't believe you haven't updated since January. For some reason, the whole thing reminded me of a Morrissey song or something like that. Anyway, pretty amazing and I can't think of any constructive critism except UPDATE MORE!

Kate

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i like this story,stuff like this is so true i mean you can relate a bit

This is a pretty good story. I like the style that it's written in.

Those are some pretty interesting pieces of writing, truly original. I enjoyed reading it, you should write more like it. Good job! Katie

This is quite a humorous story! I'll be following it - good work. I'll read chapter 2 ASAP. My one suggestion is to add a bit more description. (But it's not that big a deal.)

Until next time! (like, two minutes)

Sakka-Fenikkusu