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| Ophelia's Crown 2008-04-11 ch 1,  | abuseI'm really upset at myself for not noticing the subtle and sheer genius of your allusions. This has already long been on my list of favorites but this is what I noticed today and ashamed I didn't see before: Her being part of the force that allows him to keep creating (by the simple replacement of a light)/ sentences ending -> perhaps Dangling Conversation by Simon and Garfunkel?/ phrases and photos mingling uneasily (much like their memories and current situation with being unable to express to one another)/ the "y"s as a question/ rustling leaves of paper -> change of seasons to winter/ the sensuality of snow melting between lips and replacing the kiss that should have been there instead/ the repetition of "amber lamps" connected to her hair and the notion that she was once the source of light. Okay phew. I'm done. Guess I better get ready to teach my second class. I knew I loved this piece. |