YAY!! this one isn't depressing!! once again, i imagine these words in a song...

i like this one as well. your repetition is really well placed :) I like the mood you set its similar to mine and as i said kinda puts me in the solitudy state ~ Geena

Yay, such a nice poem =) It made me smile. Hakuna matata!

wow. omg WOW.

i really like this. maybe i'm glorifying it but it's really really mellow and super sweet and extremely clear and very well worded and and and ... *runs out of air*

i love it. i had to read it twice back to back. write more!

I like this a lot. No worries, huh. :) I can relate. Thanks for sharing, and keep writing.

~Anna~ ^_^