it is beautifully done
it has this elegance but realism
that draws the read in


the idea of small writing has a homespun feeling to it

Marvelous end repetition. This really presents the individual situation well, and connects it to the broader relevance so masterfully. Excellent scene created. Good write.

Intersting. I like this poem, and I imagine mysterious backgroud music playing with. Weird, I know, but hey...

Peace and Love

~> Summer's Almost Gone