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miss-ellen 4/15/07 . chapter 1whoa. scary. you sound like my ex. that's kinda scary. damn him, the asshole. not that you're an asshole, coz i don't know you and have no right make this judgement but yeah, my ex was. :D |
sleeplessblue 1/11/07 . chapter 1:) I like the idea of this song- "I'm unhurt from your hits." But keep on working on your grammar. And it might help if you put a line or something between the chorus and the next verse because I couldn't tell where the chorus ended. My favorite line: "I'm unhurt from your good intentions/ because good intentions don't exist" :D nice! |