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| Evenunderscore 2007-03-18 ch 1,  | abuselisten, I understand that you may have had a bad day or what not, but what you said was still rude. I said that I liked your poem. Anyway, if you take your comment off of my poem, I will take all of mine off of yours. |
| magnusthewolf 2007-01-29 ch 1, | abusethis is a nice and interesting poem with good and vivid word usage in eccective parts, however it seems uncomplete to me, but still, nice |
| Another Name For Unexpected 2007-01-02 ch 1, anon. | abuseJust dropped by to tell you that I really love this one. |
| Nemonus 2007-01-01 ch 1, | abuseI shall have you know that leaving notes for the readers in the forms of reviews from yourself is not half as effective, in my opinion, as leaving the notes in with the poem. I never read the reviews from other readers before I review because I don't want other people's opinions to sway me--but as you can probably see that means that my opinion of the first few works of yours which I read were bereft of the backstory I think you want them to have. Having now read the note to dearest "Pradeep" I know that I cannot at all understand what this poem is about (in all its subtelties etc...), so suffice it to say that I like your word choice, especially little phrases like "evocative affliction". |
| Angel Of Jashin 2006-12-31 ch 1, | abuseThat was touching... you should take up a career in writing. I've added you to my Favorite list. |
| Ironic Presence 2006-12-29 ch 1, | abuseI really like this poem. You have some really interesting and well-chosen word choices. However, I found parts of it to seem a little confusing, and the meaning of the poem seemed a little obscured; yet, that might just be my ADD. I love this poem, actually. It has a lyrical feel to it. |
| Junki 2006-12-26 ch 1, | abuseThat was very lovely, I really enjoyed this piece =) |
| Midnight Star Lights 2006-12-25 ch 1, | abuseNOTE: I wrote this for you, Pradeep! I love you much more than I have ever loved anyone in my life. You wanted me to write this for you because I always say that, "I belong to you as you belong to me." Anyway, for everyone else I just hope that you enjoy reading this because it was written out of love. I know crazy talk now! Merry Christmas because this is the time I posted it! Love, Tiffany Pradeep |