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| The Gobbler 2007-08-01 ch 1,   | I really like this. Really like this. My favorite part is the description you end with: "the crack in his voice when he tried to form words, and failed," but I also liked, "It wouldn’t just be about her, not anymore," because of the subtlety. Also, thanks for the review, and sorry it took me about four centuries to return the favor. This is impressive; isn't it strange how just dabblings turn out to be really good? |
| RamenGirl 2007-01-06 ch 1, | i know a kid named liam :). gabby my mom thinks i'm retarded because she walked by when i was reading and was all "what can you possibly be looking at with that smile on your face?". ah well, she'll never understand. i loved the way you wrote this story. STYX! BURRITO, STYX! |
| Ginnysing 2006-12-29 ch 1, | That was really heartbreaking-really beautiful. I loved the little explanation you gave to the situation because i feel like it gives the reader more room to wonder and makes it even more sweet and sad. The description was also fantastic. O-mazing! |
| Black Feather Quill 2006-12-26 ch 1, | I liked this. Good job. BFQ |
| contaminant 2006-12-25 ch 1, | Interesting. The words set the right mood for the story. |