wow, the emotion in this realy resonates with me or to put it as some of my friends would 'I feel you dawg'

L'asphyxie Cause Mon Plaisir

that is depressing. i like it though because it kind of reminds me of song lerics (of a song that i haven't heard before)

um, mood change much?

it was much more powerful and intense than the last but your poetry prowess is undiminished ^^

Wow, that rocked! I loved how you described everything so vividly! Good job!