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| Green Sea Blossom 2008-11-03 ch 6, | OH! PLEASE UPDATE SOON!(*O*) |
| hehe 2008-06-30 ch 6, | i agree with patchy |
| MantraMagazine 2008-01-21 ch 6, | I don't think your two stories are too much alike- the angel one and this one, I quite like the idea you've got here |
| patchy 2007-09-10 ch 6, | god y do u always stop right wen it gets lyk so amazing? i guess u really do lyk him i mean especially if ur eating grape jelly rite? lol i always thought u had a thing for tha bad boyz |
| Rogue-writer-16 2007-08-25 ch 6, | DUDE! Demon?! I love this story. There's a really good central concept flowing constantly throughout the whole story. I'm impressed with your description of Theo's eyes during the story and i think it's awesome you're able to write this side by side with Eve's story. (I probably should review to that one too!) Any way, i read your 'Bribe' on homepage. i was wondering if it was still open? and if it was still specifically for chapter three? Any hu, wonderful story that i am falling in love with and i can't wait for more. Bye. RW |
| I Quoth Nevermore 2007-02-19 ch 6, | I love this. Theo is a demon! You must update, I need to know what happens next. This is going to be so interesting, what with Theo being a demon and Cat being, well, human. |
| Wyvernwings 2007-02-01 ch 6, | Sniffle, mentioned last... Haha well I was mentioned. Anyway I like what you did with Theo. *nodds* Very nice touch, but I'd wonder if he knows he's a demon and lying to her or if he's compleatly clueless and needing her help *I do like the latter but it seems to be that it's already the prior with the Fairy and all*. Oh! Does Eve get a bird? |
| AubriannaKnight 2007-01-29 ch 6, | Awe I love Faye. She is so adorable. I so was not expecting Theo to be a demon, but I'm excited now. That's because after vampires, demons are my other favorite supernatural creature to read about. I'm excited to find out about the real him. Update soon. |
| SouthernQT080490 2007-01-28 ch 6, | oh i like this story and the idea behind it..please update soon :) ~Colleen |
| Nickletastic 2007-01-23 ch 6, | A demon!!?!? Wow that was a shock. Your writing has steadily improved throughout the chapters. Congrats and great job! |
| Super Powers 2007-01-18 ch 6, | This is turning out very nicely. Good work. ^_^ I can't wait to see more from you. This reminds me of Twilight, by Stephanie Meyers. |
| BattleLust 2007-01-15 ch 6, | Well I like it so far. I actually like him being a deamon. In a lot of my books I tend to do things like that where you wouldn't see it coming. I can't help it! I just like to mess with my character's minds! lol! XD |
| Rose Jameson 2007-01-15 ch 6, | o so not a HAWT GHOST, but a HAWT DEMON! O I LIKE HEHEHEHE |
| C. J. Morris 2007-01-15 ch 6, | (Meant to review earlier, but life is what happens when you are busy making other plans.) Wow. Now that was one hell of a last line! Theo seemed so sweet. (Does Theo know he is a demon?)Did you chose his name for some special reason, or because you liked it? I do like Faye, at least if I can base my judgement on what I've just read. I had expectd the major hitch in the relationship, and I'm glad for it, it makes things more interesting. |
| .Undecided.And.Confused. 2007-01-15 ch 6, | I knew he wasn't a normal ghost!! I wonder why he's there thou'...hm, interesting. |