Somehow this reminds me of a poem I've been meaning to write on the seeds of compromise-- I'm not sure why, but us writers are inherently narcissistic, no? So, you might say I'm predictable, as well. :) "Effects" in the 1st stanza should be "affects". That's really my only negative comment, and it's just spelling. The simplicity, the realism (perhaps because it is real?) behind this is refreshing (my ethereal take on life is getting stale, even to me!) I look forward to reading more of your work-- you seem fresh to me, a new perspective. `~bella~`

Wow very nice, but not at all predictable.