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| alternate peronality empori... 2007-09-25 ch 1, | Awesome. This may be spiteful, but it is very easy to tell how from the heart it comes |
| something i can never have 2007-09-25 ch 1, | this is really powerful, and wonderfully written. i really love the intensity of it! its full of angst and fear and anger and despair, and it really speaks of passion. I especially love the lines "baring my soul to a blank piece of paper/because that's all i've come to expect." Beautiful. |
| PhoenixAura 2007-03-03 ch 1, | Depressing and dark but full of anger, with some good points in there too. I like how it kinda subtly shuns society - especially the feminine-expectations the world seems to have. Nice work. ^^ |