Very sweet and so true! I love it!

Aww, that's so sweet!

This is much nicer than the other ones I've read. It still could use some prettier words, but at least you organized your thoughts well, and it doesn't feel like there is any babbling or lines you thought up out of nowhere. I like this one.

Love,
~Dia

Really, really nice. But I would suggest making it more
rhythm-y so that it is more of a poem than a paragraph. But I did like it :)

So great and powerful. I absolutely luv it!