Oh my, you must update! This is a fantastic piece of work, and I love it! I do hope you update soon!!

Hey I really liked how you wrote the story, and you're plot idea, this might just be me, but I always like plots where girls are disguised as boys. Have you ever read the Alanna series by Tamora Pierce? Anyways, the plot keeps people reading and your story title draws everyone's attention!

I really enjoyed reading this story. I think it has a fun plot. Keep up the good work, I can't wait to read another chapter.
Mely

Haha, nice.
Can't wait to see what kind of guy this Prince William is...

"I shivered, regretfully. It had been my first human kill."

The last part was, somehow, at the same time funny and infuriating!
Really amazing how a piece of good writing can make people feel...especially bookworms like me...LoL
Please update soon!

Yay! You updated! I'm liking how things are moving along. Don't make us wait so long next time!

This is very nice. I like it. I hope to read more, so update soon!

I like your ideas about magic, they're really interesting. And different. I hope you update soon!

I know exactly what you're talking about. You can do all the plotting in the world, but there's no way you'll stick to it. What's the fun in that?

Aww, it really is sad. :(

Isabel really bugs me.

Wait...how come the older sister is acceptable, if they had to hide the younger's identity? You said that her mother would've died if she was a girl, but the older sister is a girl.

And if the king had heart and breathing problems, why was he fencing in the first chapter?

Don't ya just love chapters that write themselves? ^_^ I've had that happen quite a few times.

Anyway, I really liked this one. *moves on to read the next chap*

Hahaha, nice. Way to reveal that minor detail at the very end of the chapter, to draw us all in.

I like how the tone matches the medieval theme. Aside from that, the story itself is looking pretty good. :D