I really loved this story. I wish she'd trust Shephard more although I understand why she doesn't. The least he could do was give her a bit more training before escorting her out of the safest safe house.
Loved it :)

aww man!! I just cant w8 for the next one! (",) i liked it!

I cnt believe u dont have 10 reviews by now! yOu ArE gOod! Wow really this is an awsum story!! Pls update soon...u will be my new fav authr...kay enjoy ur eastr (and no rest 4 u, uhave to be halfway thru the next chappie by now...*wink*)
New Loyal fan
Lala

AWESOME! Please please PLEASE write more of this!

Well now Pip. I decided to read it. I'm only done the first chapter, but it is very intriguing. I'm very curious as to where this leads and what happens. :)

a promising story