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| Tainted Tears 2006-12-26 ch 1,  | abuseOh, yes... thank-you for the reality check of life. I like the last four lines in particular; strong execution, I believe. Although I think you could've done a bit more to kind-of SLAM this reality check into the reader's faces, it's still pretty good and enjoyable. :) And thank-you for the kind review! I really appreciate it! If you have the time, review some of my other stuff as well! They're not poems, but just short stories. My writing has definitely changed over the years, but I still think they are enjoyable for some (maybe you would be one of them?). |