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| Lady of Confusion 2008-07-11 ch 9,   | its good...update soon! |
| Jevanminx 2008-06-26 ch 9, | Oh will she join the organisation, and yeah shoulda guessed they would wire his aparetment, hehehehe. JM |
| RoseLife 2008-06-26 ch 9, | YAY AN UPDATE i REALLY love this story the whole assassin stories are my favourites :D keep it up i hope u have a new chappie soon! ^.^ |
| Candyfloss Victim 2008-06-26 ch 9, | oh my GOD! she's gunna have to become an assassin? and geez, tyler had anger issues...but i still like him. i like sean too, he's a cute character lol |
| Candyfloss Victim 2008-06-25 ch 8, | this is so well written! i really hope the next chapter comes out soon, even though you're under pressure updating your other stories. i think it's a shame that more people haven't read this. |
| D-Mish 2007-10-26 ch 8, | NO! YOU CANT FINISH HERE! |
| Nightlove 2007-09-22 ch 8, | hey,love this story. keep it coming |
| i found nemo 2007-09-11 ch 8, | First of all, I'm definitely loving your story so far. It is so not what you normally read on this site and everything seems to flow pretty well. My only suggestion is maybe you should change the title--there's nothing wrong with it, but it's kind of vague and doesn't really reflect the rest of your story. The summary is what made me want to read the story. But that's just a suggestion, so don't feel like you have to change it. Great job so far and I'll definitely keep reading! |
| A Different Kind of Yellow 2007-09-11 ch 8, | Argh! What annoyance! I quite like this story, actually, a little rushed, but fantastic otherwise (don't get me wrong about that!). Would she really help kill her own father? Little serious, but I guess if I had a bastard dad like that I'd maybe want to as well. Or just change my name and get as far away from him as possible. Right well, looking forward to your next update!! |
| camila 2007-09-11 ch 8, | I really thought they were gonna kiss. I like this chapter because he tell her the true and she doesn't care and want to help. This is a nice chapter. Please updated soon. |
| HumanInfiltrator 2007-09-11 ch 8, | He-he-he. Keep going. |
| SuperCUTEJensen 2007-09-11 ch 8, | love it...cant wait to read more! |
| Halani 2007-09-11 ch 8, | Aw! They needed to kiss! This story is so awesomely fantabulous! Update soon! |
| RoseLife 2007-09-11 ch 8, | OMG! I'M IN LOVE WITH THIS STORY!! ARgh! its totally awsome and the plot rules XD NAWW! they like each other!! BLOODY DOOR BELL!! -profanities bursting out from mouth- hehe. damn! so close though! haha great job! keep it up and UPDATE SOON! =P ~RL~ |
| FireFallon 2007-09-11 ch 8, | Goddamned doorbells they never know when they're not supposed to ring! |