Very interesting concept, although there was quite a bit of information to take in, which made it difficult to understand at some points. I will look forward to the next installment of this work, whenever it may be.
~K3k

Well, I've finally gotten around to reading this, and I've had it in my C2 for a while. Sorry it took me so long, but real life sucks. Anyway, I just want to say that this could be the beginning of a great story. Though, this does look like it needs a bit of editing (every story does, even mine), so I wanted to ask if you needed a beta? I'd be more than willing, this is just the type of story I would love editing. Though, I don't get to a computer very often, but you did say that you were a slow updater (I am too), so it shouldn't be much of a problem.

Anyway, you can reply if you would like me to beta this story.

I hope that you update soon.

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~VGT~