|Reviews for Listen Child|
| a silenced revolution 3/19/07 . chapter 1
That is beautiful-
I couldn't love it more.
(I've said that before.)
| Ashelin 12/26/06 . chapter 1
I love how the poem ended the same as it began. Kind of a strange symbolism, the cycle of life. I thought this was really beautiful, great job.
| Alison Wright 12/26/06 . chapter 1
Good. I like how you take perspective here as almost a grandmostherly postion or maybe motherly. You put yourself at a distance from the audience and here it has postive results. Good work.