That is beautiful-

I couldn't love it more.

Wonderful job.

(I've said that before.)

I love how the poem ended the same as it began. Kind of a strange symbolism, the cycle of life. I thought this was really beautiful, great job.

Good. I like how you take perspective here as almost a grandmostherly postion or maybe motherly. You put yourself at a distance from the audience and here it has postive results. Good work.