I'm loving the repetition. I hate crying, but sometimes you have to cry to make things better. Great job.

Hi, very nice structure, very nice formatting, very nice use of repition and especially breaking that repition (presumably to draw attention) on the last line. I'm struggling to think of some criticism, just keep going and getting and getting better, I guess. Sorry, that doesn't help at all, does it?

Fleur C. Stein