Intense. This is why I'm so careful, why I watch my step, cause I know that line exists, and I don't want to risk crossing it. Because I know it's so easy to do. Accidental, as you said. You might not even notice that the line is right behind you, and if you trip, stumble, lose your footing for even a split second... it's all over. It's done, and there's nothing you can do. That's what I'm so scared of. Thank you for putting it into words, and sharing it with the world. Maybe now you, and anyone else who's crossed the line, or is close to crossing the line can get help, before it's too late.

Cassandra

Completley real and scary. Honest. I totally can relate. Love the lyrics at the begenning. That song really fits the story.(Added to favorites)

I can so relate and this is such a good and memorizing call to show how much hurt we have and the pain of getting stuck in this addiction...It hurts and we don't know why it seems to be better eveytime we cut...Lil Sis

Heartrenderingly honest and horrifyingly real. I don't know what else to say. This is on the verge of brilliance, though painfully so. Oh, and I loved the use of Plumb lyrics in the beginning. That is such a beautiful song, with the piano? Lovely. sk8rgrl

you know what i love about your writing? details. you are SO good/incredible/awesome at them. & your pain is genuine not fake like some kid making up problems.

this like your other works has made me twinge a bit. this is very dark & powerful. nice work.

I agree, this is creepy. Beautifully written, but creepy. It leaves an impression on my mind that I won't soon forget.

-Denmark

This is really creepy. Well-written, but totally creepy. If you ever need someone to talk to, my email/msn is on my profile.

Thanks for the reviews.

rowan.