|Reviews for Complicated|
| one mourning dove 6/20/07 . chapter 4
The dialogue is such a treat, Persephone's voice is so, so entertaining.
Update if you please?
| Phantom'sLuv 6/20/07 . chapter 4
PLEASE update this. It's going well so far. Please keep going.
| Anniee 3/9/07 . chapter 4
Hey Jess, I really like your storey...hope you update soon!
| Queen of Absolutely Everything 1/16/07 . chapter 4
I love this so far! Persephone is so sarcastically charismatic-simply delightful. And I hope to see more Hades; he alwayd was my favorite of the Greek gods. Please continue with the story soon!
| Lily Turwaithiel 1/9/07 . chapter 1
So Finally I can officially review your story bestest buddy because your lame and I have to sign up to review you...Anyways I love your story and you really need to tell me when your updating and update soon! Screw studying for Finals! New Chapter!
| yellow pen 1/8/07 . chapter 3
i like how persephone can't even remember how old she is. it's sort of funny, and it makes a lot of sense
| you'll see 1/6/07 . chapter 2
I like this and understand Persephone's opinion of Hades, except I would be much more frsutrated. Can she leave her rooms? Did she try to talk to him? (Yes, that seems cliche, but it is logical.)
I liked the change of scene for when Hades took her from a meadow to her garden at night, it was a beautiful image.
| tuieri 12/31/06 . chapter 3
teehee, i read this out loud to myself (cause everything sounds better out loud) and i make persephone british ! hah. write more, i know how hard it can be...
| yellow pen 12/27/06 . chapter 2
i'm very glad that persephone is disturbed and turned off by the kidnapping, even though she would have considered hades as a husband had he asked nicely
| tuieri 12/27/06 . chapter 2
there are so many versions of this myth (sigh) but i think i'll stick w/ this one...