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ElegantDisaster89 2008-11-24 ch 26,	That was so utterly beautiful. I am actually very glad that you didn't kill off Monica. Although I'm sure other's might have thought that it vary's too much from the original story I honestly think that her learning from the death means so much more. Living takes so much more strength than that of taking your own life. Just because something terrible happens, does not give someone the automatic right to kill themselves in turn. If anything you should see the reasons to live even more. Why put others through the pain and heartache that you were once put through.
ElegantDisaster89 2008-11-24 ch 24,	HEART WRENCHING! Wow. Just...wow. That was amazing...I love the note. It was breathtaking.
ElegantDisaster89 2008-11-24 ch 20,	wow. I loved this chapter so much. I cried reading the poem. The after math so far is creepily accurate. The term "been there done that" comes to mind. I want to thank you. I appreciate it when people actually get this stuff right, I hate when writers try to describe something and just don't seem to make the connection. I recently had to drive my own brother to the hospital because he overdosed and took kitchen scissors to his wrist. I myself cut as well so I can see from both sides of the window. That last line definately got me...it describes everything so perfectly. Thank you.
SameiCullen 2008-11-10 ch 26,	Wow, this whole thing was great. I've been waiting to read this for a wile but I picked a bad time to do that I guess because now its midnight and im crying over who sad that ending is. I'm glad that i did read it though because it was good and I might have needed a tragic love story that I'm not involved in for once, so thank you for writeing this.
jacqlau 2008-11-03 ch 26,	Jesus, i didnt think it would end like that. I am STILL crying! You are one talented author i tell you that, i cant stop crying now at the poor lost love! I know this review is like, months and months late, but i found this and it was brilliant! So, hope to read another of yours again soon, and I'll leave you with one final word...WOW
loveables 2008-08-24 ch 26,	woa.. wen i first ebgan dis story.. i was lik ew fluff alert..but afa a while it got betta nd i nva xpectd di ending. i teard up..gud job
I.Write.Therefore.I.Am 2008-08-20 ch 26,	I had to wait a few minutes after typing up this review because I was crying so hard. At the beginning of this story, I didn't think I was going to like it much. Neither Damien nor Monica are my type of protagonists, but I kept reading, and eventually read all 26 chapters before I realized it. Congratulations on a fantastic story. You did a great job in making Damien and Monica, and even Taylor, real. They felt like people I know, and the way you write brought tears to my eyes, especially in the last four chapters or so. I never thought it would end the way it did. Many many kudos and stuff like that. Congratulations again on a wonderful and well written story. Sarah
missthing06 2008-07-15 ch 26,	wow that was one hell of a story like, totally not how i thought i would go like the typical stories would, very deep as well i loved it
Amaryllis Faye 2008-07-04 ch 25,	i hate this
crazychic7278 2008-06-26 ch 26,	damn, im still sniffing(sp) from crying (im a cry baby) but anyway what an unique story and it did have an effect on me...even through it was kinda like the plot romeo and juliet but yet it was so different...i loved the story and its going to my favorite...keep on writing cause your writing is great...
hoperoma 2008-06-25 ch 1,	This was unbelievably touching. I simply adored it. And just letting you know that you made me cry like a baby. Keep up the amazing work.
Bianca 2008-05-26 ch 26,	Holy crap girl, by far an amazing story! I'be never really actually stuck to a story on fiction sites till the very end, and I actually think yours is the first one. You are an amazing writer, and actually I cried so hard for the last 3 chapters (haha) and I'm still crying now... like hard. Haha, amazing story! Good job!
cue.dramatic.gasp. 2008-04-26 ch 26,	Beautiful.
caged.girl 2008-04-21 ch 26,	Wow. thanks for making me cry, I know i needed it. Your story was incredible. thanks for sharing.
ItalianStallionette 2008-04-19 ch 25,	Okay. I think that I should first start out by saying that this was one of the best stories I've ever read on here. Until you completely up the ending. I just don't understand what you were thinking. Having the hero commit suicide because of unrequited love isn't romantic in the least. You just don't do that in a romance story. The ending didn't make me cry as much as say WTF? I as too to really be heartbroken at the end. I feel cheated. I followed this story for the longest time, waiting months in-between updates at times, for this? For them not to finally overcome their differences, but for the guy to commit suicide and Monica only come to appreciate him after he's dead? Are you kidding me? I'm sorry, but that was the worst ending ever. I'm pretty **. I somewhat feel as if I should have just never even read the end because it did not "justify the means". It just didn't add up. But, all of this having been said, I can still recognize good writing when I see it, and you have it. Even though I didn't necessarily like the ending, it was still well written and captivating. I guess if you're not a "happily-ever-after" person, you'll love it. Even in the midst of having disappointment crash over me I could still appreciate how good the [first part of] story was. All in all, great plot and written like a pro. Great job. I look forward to your next story (only this time I think I'll pass on the ending.

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