Very sad. Very touching. And it ended perfectly. No, happy ending could ever justify her actions; it took the death of another to make her realize how bad of a person she truly was. And I still believe that Monica is a bad person. I thought she changed toward the ending; but really, she hasn't. If Damien was still alive and she was hanging around her 'prep' friends, she would still be that ** she was earlier. So really... there is no change. No effect. The person I really feel bad for is Damien, as well as his brother and Taylor. Especially so for Damien and his brother. Damien shouldn't have killed himself over Monica, she wasn't worth it. Its sad that he couldn't see that she wasn't worth it. He became another teen statistic for nothing. His brother lost two of his siblings, whom who he cared for, to suicide. That can really screw a person up. In some ways, Damien was being selfish. He knew how Molly effected him. He knew how Molly effected his brother. But to commit the same act? For a girl who was willingly to throw away his love to hang with her fake friends?

God just finished reading it and feel like i need to cry. Great story but im a sucker for a happy ending :D

That was so utterly beautiful. I am actually very glad that you didn't kill off Monica. Although I'm sure other's might have thought that it vary's too much from the original story I honestly think that her learning from the death means so much more.

Living takes so much more strength than that of taking your own life.

Just because something terrible happens, does not give someone the automatic right to kill themselves in turn. If anything you should see the reasons to live even more. Why put others through the pain and heartache that you were once put through.

HEART WRENCHING! Wow. Just...wow. That was amazing...I love the note. It was breathtaking.

wow. I loved this chapter so much. I cried reading the poem. The after math so far is creepily accurate. The term "been there done that" comes to mind.
I want to thank you. I appreciate it when people actually get this stuff right, I hate when writers try to describe something and just don't seem to make the connection.

I recently had to drive my own brother to the hospital because he overdosed and took kitchen scissors to his wrist. I myself cut as well so I can see from both sides of the window.

That last line definately got me...it describes everything so perfectly. Thank you.

Wow, this whole thing was great. I've been waiting to read this for a wile but I picked a bad time to do that I guess because now its midnight and im crying over who sad that ending is. I'm glad that i did read it though because it was good and I might have needed a tragic love story that I'm not involved in for once, so thank you for writeing this.

Jesus, i didnt think it would end like that. I am STILL crying! You are one talented author i tell you that, i cant stop crying now at the poor lost love! I know this review is like, months and months late, but i found this and it was brilliant! So, hope to read another of yours again soon, and I'll leave you with one final word...WOW

woa.. wen i first ebgan dis story.. i was lik ew fluff alert..but afa a while it got betta nd i nva xpectd di ending. i teard up..gud job

I had to wait a few minutes after typing up this review because I was crying so hard. At the beginning of this story, I didn't think I was going to like it much. Neither Damien nor Monica are my type of protagonists, but I kept reading, and eventually read all 26 chapters before I realized it.

Congratulations on a fantastic story. You did a great job in making Damien and Monica, and even Taylor, real. They felt like people I know, and the way you write brought tears to my eyes, especially in the last four chapters or so. I never thought it would end the way it did.

Many many kudos and stuff like that.

Congratulations again on a wonderful and well written story.

Sarah

wow that was one hell of a story like, totally not how i thought i would go like the typical stories would, very deep as well i loved it

i hate this

damn, im still sniffing(sp) from crying (im a cry baby) but anyway what an unique story and it did have an effect on me...even through it was kinda like the plot romeo and juliet but yet it was so different...i loved the story and its going to my favorite...keep on writing cause your writing is great...

This was unbelievably touching. I simply adored it.

And just letting you know that you made me cry like a baby. Keep up the amazing work.

Holy crap girl, by far an amazing story! I'be never really actually stuck to a story on fiction sites till the very end, and I actually think yours is the first one. You are an amazing writer, and actually I cried so hard for the last 3 chapters (haha) and I'm still crying now... like hard. Haha, amazing story! Good job!

Beautiful.