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| simpleplan13 2007-02-04 ch 1, | abuseI like the repition... the metaphor is awesome |
| dog-eared hanyou 2007-01-09 ch 1, | abuse10 times more entertaining than that Shakespeare and Friends play today. Actually, I'd rate it much higher than 10 but any more zeros is overkill. I really, really like this. Seems more narrative-ish than your older ones. *doesn't know words* |
| Purified Angel 2007-01-09 ch 1, | abusePowerful words, i like it ;3. The last line: "Yet, I am a canvas - painted, with a deep passion for you." is a really good line. Iono, it just kinda..jumps out at you. Powerful words and phrases, it's good ;3. Keep up the good work =] |
| Aku no Otaku 2007-01-07 ch 1, | abuseits cool :) |