Our anthem of the dying, I think I love that phrase. Awesome poem. I think I'd like it better if the lines weren't so short, but either way its very well written.

The repetition in this works well, and your descriptions are beautiful and powerful. Sometimes it was a bit cliche, but well-written nonetheless.

This is very nice. I love the repetistion of "Someday" in this. The title really caught my eye as well. Good job.

Thanks for the review!

Rowan.