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| Silent Troll 2006-12-30 ch 1,  | abuseI like the action, especially the last line "the dust has risen". It shows that the horse really is running (rather than just relying on what says in the second line). I don't know I just really like that connection. |
| Basara 2006-12-28 ch 1, | abuserunning? a race? or freedom? nice... |
| MikaelaBanes 2006-12-26 ch 1, | abuseSo true. Horses are cute. Good job :) |