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count me out 2007-05-17 . chapter 5
Haha, good chapter. So, the elusive phone-stealer introduces himself at last...who could it be? Charlie's party should be itneresting, I can't wait to see what it's about! Happy Summer!!
HollyRushdy 2007-05-13 . chapter 5
" If people only understood each other more, than there would be so much less misery in this goddamned world." Too true, my friend, too true... anyway, Love it!
Pieces of the sun 2007-05-02 . chapter 5
This is freakin awesome, man! I'll stop with the strange talk. Update soon! I am so keen on finding out who has Regan's cell phone. Oh, and can you describe what Regan looks like? Sorry if you already did in earlier chapters, I must have missed or forgot it.
JustWriter 2007-05-02 . chapter 5
(evil laugh emanates)

I kinda want her end up with Carson. ^-^'


-JW`chan ^-^
Pieces of the sun 2007-05-01 . chapter 1
Love it so far! On to ch.2
glamoureste 2007-05-01 . chapter 5
OMG, I HATE the 500 free.
Haha. I, like, die the first 100 already. I'm so sad.

One of my event's is actually the 200 IM.
I kinda enjoy it, except I usually have no energy for the free because it's my worst stroke and it happens to be last...
My best is fly, sometimes I wish it weren't because swimming a 200 Fly is MURDEER.

Okay, ya. Anyway, I really like your story. :]
Charlie, Dane, and Jeremy all sound so HOTT!
And I LOVE the name Regan.
Krystal Mauritius 2007-05-01 . chapter 5
I just found your story and I love it. Regan is a great character, I like that she is normal, not perfect. The guys are cool and there is certainly more to them. I honestly can't begin to guess who has Regan's phone, I want to say Charlie, but then I feel like it could be a trick and it could be Jeremy, even though he claims he doesn't have it. I am also beginning to think it is none of the three guys and someone else entirely. Anyways, I hope you update soon.
count me out 2007-04-03 . chapter 4
Wow, what a cliffhanger! The anticipation's KILLING me. Okay, slightly melodramatic, but regardless, I look forward to an update. Happy Spring Break (at least for me, lol)!
Trmpetplaya1 2007-03-06 . chapter 4
::nod nod:: I like Charlie better, too.
And I like your story too :)
The Grace thing was fine, methinks. And I liked the ending. Wanna know who it is though (of course) but I think I can convince myself to wait until you reveal the culprit ;)

Looking forward to the next chapter!
theeighthhouse 2007-02-18 . chapter 4
eh.
what?!

hmm..hehe.
euphorix 2007-02-07 . chapter 4
oh! smart with the 'nolan will be so **' comment. cant wait to read more!
Saniaaa 2007-02-03 . chapter 4
hey, the story's coming great. I really like it. And now it's just got better. Can't wait for more of Dane! update soon :D
marikamaroca 2007-02-01 . chapter 4
keep up the good work
JustWriter 2007-01-28 . chapter 4
I L-O-V-E this story! It's just as good, probably even better than your Beauty and the Beast ficlet! I was drawn to it because I just recently lost my cell phone. ;_; It was my first one ever and I just HAD to lose it while it was off! ;_;

For some reason I felt so heated when I was reading the part when Carson and she were staring at each other. Of course that could be due to the fact that I was listening to the slow version of, "Everytime We Touch," at the time. Here's the link if you want to listen to it. Don't forget to delete the spaces.

h t t p : / / w w w . y o u t u b e . c o m / w a t c h ? v = d U 8 8 6 x k U 5 y 8

You so have to update soon! Remember? I know where you sleep! (If you haven't read my other review, you're probably freaking out right now, so read the other review before you call the Federal Beaureau Investigation!)

-JW`chan ^-^
Artful Sexification 2007-01-27 . chapter 4
Mm, I like how this story is going, but... right near the start of this chapter, you have Regan pulling out her cell phone to call her friends.

"I pulled out my cell phone as I collapsed on the couch."

...

Hasn't she LOST it? o_o

Just thought I should point that out. :D
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